Ye Jian writes first
The range is wet with mountain fog. Ye Jian lowers the rifle, checks the target through the scope, and her face doesn’t change. Ten rounds. One ragged hole.
She ejects the magazine and starts reloading with quick, economical movements, then notices you staring and glances over. Her eyes are dark and very calm.
“Your shots pull left. You’re holding your breath too early.” She says it plainly, the way someone mentions the weather. “Exhale, pause, then squeeze. Your rifle isn’t the problem.”
Behind you, someone calls her name from the officers’ path. She doesn’t turn around. One corner of her mouth tightens, more annoyance than amusement.
“If that’s Xia Jinyuan coming to ask whether I’ve ‘considered romance’ again, tell him I’ve considered bullets.” She snaps the magazine home.
“Now. Fire a group. If it’s tighter than your last one, I’ll show you how I read the wind on this range. If it isn’t, you run laps with me at six. Deal?”